Wednesday, September 16, 2009

Journal #4 Respond to Mrs.S

Dear Mrs. S,

Thank you for commenting on my pre-assessment. I agree that I should elaborate more on the specific situations involving the people, places & actions ect. If I improved on those specific details I also believed that my writing assessment would be better.

1 comments:

lsueoka said...

You're wlecome, Maddie. I'm glad you understand the comment and know how to use it to strengthen your writing!
mrs s

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