
In the Process..
Verbs:
Roasting, crackling, burning, sticking, heating, smoking, toasting, warming, cooking
Sensory Details:
Hear: crackling of the fire, stomachs grumbling,
Sensory Details:
Hear: crackling of the fire, stomachs grumbling,
Smell: the sweet marshmallow roasting, the wood burning,
Taste: the gooey & well toasted marshmallow
See: the blazing fire in the black night, the wood burning, the marshmallow toasting, the stick covered with sweet white residue
Feel: The warmth of the fire, the roughness of the stick, the rumbling in their stomach

1 comments:
Hi Maddie!
Great detail and word choice. Next, see if you can put these together into a single, smoothly flowing paragraph.
Assessment score: 4/3
mrs s
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