Article: Jessica Slaughter: Kerligurl13
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There should be more restrictions towards adolescent kids who go on social networking sites because it may deter cyber bullying.
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- MaddieNguyen
- Lucky #19. My name is Madelynne Nguyen but you can just call me Maddie:) Ive been in this meneMAC program for about two years now and is currently a sophmore:) Reside on the west coast, but was raised in the south! I like to live in style and education is my number one priority... I like to dance even though im not good at it:D Real life is competitive so I always have to be my best.. If you are not an outgoing person, life will be very difficult for you. MeneMAC helped me me be myself, be out there, and break out of my shell:) If you want to know more about me just ask!! :D
1 comments:
Hi Maddie,
This is a good revision of your original post. Now you've got a single sentence proposition, with the possibility for both pro and con.
mrs s
Revision score: 4
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