Hello there MADDIE!!! I really love your poster!! I actually looks like a poster! No joke! I also understand the concept of your poster. I can see that you tried to show yourself walking the pathway that you have already chosen. The road leading to your future, your career. You learned from all of your mistakes and those have helped you progress. However, I do not understand some parts of the poster. The beginning text: "Life Goes On...." is sort of confusing me. I don't see how it ties in with "Learn from your mistakes." Also, what is that gray striped hexagon looking object in front of the girl? Is that an umbrella? I don't know what it is. Another thing, brighten the opacity of the words listed at the bottom of your poster. I can barely see it. Why don't you try removing "Life Goes On..." and move "Learn From Your Mistakes" to the top of your poster. Then, you can list all the words that relates to coming of age at the bottom.
Overall, great start! Just fix some of the graphic elements!
Lucky #19. My name is Madelynne Nguyen but you can just call me Maddie:) Ive been in this meneMAC program for about two years now and is currently a sophmore:) Reside on the west coast, but was raised in the south! I like to live in style and education is my number one priority... I like to dance even though im not good at it:D Real life is competitive so I always have to be my best.. If you are not an outgoing person, life will be very difficult for you. MeneMAC helped me me be myself, be out there, and break out of my shell:) If you want to know more about me just ask!! :D
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Hello there MADDIE!!!
I really love your poster!! I actually looks like a poster! No joke!
I also understand the concept of your poster. I can see that you tried to show yourself walking the pathway that you have already chosen. The road leading to your future, your career. You learned from all of your mistakes and those have helped you progress.
However, I do not understand some parts of the poster. The beginning text: "Life Goes On...." is sort of confusing me. I don't see how it ties in with "Learn from your mistakes."
Also, what is that gray striped hexagon looking object in front of the girl? Is that an umbrella? I don't know what it is.
Another thing, brighten the opacity of the words listed at the bottom of your poster. I can barely see it. Why don't you try removing "Life Goes On..." and move "Learn From Your Mistakes" to the top of your poster. Then, you can list all the words that relates to coming of age at the bottom.
Overall, great start! Just fix some of the graphic elements!
VALEDICTORIAN! ^^
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