Sunday, August 29, 2010

Coming of Age: Poster Draft


Instead of the silhouette of the girl, It will be me and Im debating whether or not to add a bus stop and a sign saying "One Way Street".

1 comments:

Shaneika Aguilar said...

Hello there MADDIE!!!
I really love your poster!! I actually looks like a poster! No joke!
I also understand the concept of your poster. I can see that you tried to show yourself walking the pathway that you have already chosen. The road leading to your future, your career. You learned from all of your mistakes and those have helped you progress.
However, I do not understand some parts of the poster. The beginning text: "Life Goes On...." is sort of confusing me. I don't see how it ties in with "Learn from your mistakes."
Also, what is that gray striped hexagon looking object in front of the girl? Is that an umbrella? I don't know what it is.
Another thing, brighten the opacity of the words listed at the bottom of your poster. I can barely see it. Why don't you try removing "Life Goes On..." and move "Learn From Your Mistakes" to the top of your poster. Then, you can list all the words that relates to coming of age at the bottom.

Overall, great start! Just fix some of the graphic elements!

VALEDICTORIAN! ^^

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